Six Sentence Sunday
#sixsunday is from a contemporary interracial I just turned in to my editor. It’s tentatively titled ALL ABOARD. (Sorry–I’m putting Brandt, Keagan, and Calista on hold for the time being. They’re not cooperating with me.) So…what happens when you put co-workers, who also happen to be fierce rivals, in the same sleeping car aboard a train over night?
Fireworks.
“I don’t hate you,” he replied quickly. “I hate your sassy mouth, but I’ve got something in mind for shutting it up for a few minutes.”
A little of her spunk started to make a comeback. She’d show him a sassy mouth. “I’ve got your sassy right…” Tasha’s breath whooshed out the second Hayden’s fingers slid over the curve of her breast, found her nipple and squeezed lightly.
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Good luck with the submission Dee! That is a fabulously sexy excerpt.
Woo hooo! Sassy indeed! My mind went into the gutter instantly as soon as he said he had something to put in there. Love the visual with it too. 😀
Damn! I gasped at the last line!
He quieted her down in a hurry! Nice!
Oh very nice! I’d like to be shut up by a movement like that 😉
Love the visual! Both the one you posted as well as the one that popped into my head the moment he told her he had something in mind for shutting her up. 🙂
Oh, yeah. That’ll shut her up!
Fabbo!
Kerrianne
Way to shut her up all right!
My husband has often struggled with my sassy mouth – I’m not sure it is 😉 I’ll have to share Hayden’s techinque with him.
Whoa! My temp went up when I saw the pic. The snippet put me over the edge. NICE!
OMG, you do hot so well Dee!
Nice. But get those other characters under control too!
Very hot! Looking forward to reading it soon.
Woah!
Nice post!
I think the train is going to be a rockin’ soon.
Oh, sparks are going to fly. Nothing like rivals to add to the tension. Bet this will be one fun, hot read.
Hmm. Not too hard a squeeze, I hope. Hot stuff, Dee.
Sorry to hear your characters are being uncooperative, but this excerpt is pure YUM.
I guess that’s one way to get the upper hand!
Good luck with your submission! Great sentences this week.
Love the description of the upcoming story! That’s a really hot excerpt you chose to share with us.
Yay! Love it
If the rest of the book is as great as those sentences, you should have a contact in your inbox in a few days.
Yum! I wanna know what happens next!
Good luck on the submission Dee. This sounds great. I would love to read more!
Wow! Yum! I love that line. “I don’t hate you,” he replied quickly. “I hate your sassy mouth, but I’ve got something in mind for shutting it up for a few minutes.”” sooo naughty!!
xx
Ang
That won’t shut her up. The noise is only beginning! 😉 Great post Dee and good luck on the submission.
Love a woman with sass and a man who knows how to set her right!! Good luck, Dee!! 🙂
Heh-heh. Yeah, that should quiet her down! >:) <– devil face