Six Sentence Sunday
#sixsunday today is from my not-so-sekrit D/s story. It’s got a title and all. I know those of you following Joy and Porter will be disappointed that I’ve put them down (again), but I needed a break from that one. And this one y’all is coming easily. You know when that happens, take the ball and run!
So here are the first six lines from this WIP:
My body quivered for a second or two longer before the orgasm I hoped would sweep me under evaporated into the darkness of my bedroom. Blinking against the night, I waited for the need to gulp air, or for my muscles to unclench. Neither occurred. Long minutes passed before I decided the post-climactic high I craved would not be forthcoming.
Disgusted and frustrated, I threw the vibrator aside, neither caring whether it remained on the bed or shattered against cherrywood flooring. When I’d broken up with Rob, I’d promised myself a life of indulgence; this wasn’t it.
There is an insane-crazy number of authors participating in Six Sentence Sunday this week. Go check out some of the awesomeness at the official site here. You may have noticed this is my 51st posting to SSS–that’s because today marks the one year anniversary of this project. Go over to the site to see what prizes are being handed out today…including something from moi!
Wow! Can’t decide which is hotter, your snippet or the sexy man candy. Wonderful first six lines!
~Sarah
Poor girl, so frustrated! Congrats on celebrating a year of SSS as one of the originals! Great excerpt.
Clearly she needs that hot chained man to help her out a bit!
There is just about nothing worse than that kind of frustration! 🙂
Ohhhhh delicious! Poor vibrator, so abused. 😉
Wow – now this is what they call voice!
Poor woman, how frustrating.
I believe I would like that man in the pic – chains and all!
Girl needs some help. I’d read on to see if she goes on the prowl. great lines and great pic!
Oh LOVE THE PHOTO! So pushes me to work on my BDSM novel..
and Aww poor girl! She needs to go find herself a good man! *nods*!
xx
Angela 1
DAMMIT! A disappointing vibrator SUCKS! Nice snippet!
I think it’s going to take the real deal to please this lady. Next week is a long time to wait for the big O but, hey, I’ll be back.
Great six.
gem
She needs to grab something with a pulse and force the orgasm out. Poor thing.
The writing is great. I can feel her frustration!
I know her frustration…arghhhh that photograph! Dee! What are you trying to do to us all on a Sunday morning. I LOVE six sentence sunday, this might just be why LOL
Powerful and frustrating all once. Nice and great pic too!
Groan.
(You kill me, Dee. In words and pictures!)
Next time put the extremely hot man in chains after the text. He kept distracting me. Though, I guess it helps share your character’s frustration.
Ugh, so feel her frustration! Missed orgasms suck! But holy christ on a crutch. THAT PICTURE! Woman! Killing us! Don’t stop!
Clearly she needs to trade that vibrator for something with a bit more flesh/muscle/heat. lol
My guess is she is about to do just that!
Poor abused toys. But that picture! Wahoo!
Yep, she definitely needs to trade up. The guy in the pic would do nicely!
Nothing like a hot body instead of making love to something with a battery or an electric cord. Terrific six
Sounds like a turning point!
Bad vibrator…lol! Good snippet!
I believe Dee has inspired a new Sunday 6 group called “Hot Men Sundays” :p
Well now. The picture was yummy. The words were frustrating.
Great six, brought us into the view of the character. Can’t wait for next sunday.
She needs someone who is going to make that big O, awesome. I bet he is soon to show her the meaning of wait for it and it will be amazing.
Poor girl needs a man! Sounds like a great steamy book!! Great sentences!
Poor girl…not that I know anything about that…lol
Holy smokes girl! What a hot way to start a book! I would definitely keep reading. 🙂
Very steamy and sexy I’m dying for more!
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Oh, I can relate.
Can’t she return it under warranty and hire the guy in chains instead?! 😛
You always have the best pictures, Dee! And you really pinpointed that ‘can’t orgasm’ frustration. Not that I’ve ever been there…. ever….
You use words well. Great six.
This six is fab! What a great start to a book. You ROCKED it again lady! ‘PSSST’ nice pic too. LOL
That was great , Dee, and I loved your eye candy.
Poor gal! Sounds like that hot guy in the pic needs to give her a hand. 😉
Great six as always!
Damn you! *fans self*
Poor thing. I’m sure someone will come along and give her a hand. 😉
Don’t you hate when that happens? 🙂
Poor girl, that must have been frustrating! Sounds like it’s time for some rebound love!
Um, wow–distracting picture is distracting. (Nice six, tho. ;))
ummmmmm…obviously she needs lessons in indulgence…
Wow! As usual, I can’t wait to see more of this!
Very nice picture! I love the six, shame she didn’t get the release she needed.
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Poor woman. She really needs to invest in a better quality vibrator.
What?
Just kidding. Very sexy snippet 🙂
Aww, that SUCKS. poor thing. i hope she gets what she needs SOON. nice six, Dee!
Even Battery operated boyfriends aren’t enough sometimes
Love your description of what she intended/needed to experience.