Six Sentence Sunday
#sixsunday is discovering vampires really do exist in PASSION AROUSED. Alice has just stepped knee-deep into Bast’s world.
Gathering every ounce of her courage, she took a tiny step closer. She had to prove to herself this wasn’t real. It was some sort of not funny joke that she’d giggle about later, because of course vampires didn’t really exist. They were born out of the imaginations of authors and older brothers hell bent on scaring the shit out their younger siblings.
Heart pounding, breath barely squeezing past her lips, she tilted her head to the side to look at Sebastian’s face again. One more look into his mouth at those teeth. They couldn’t be real…couldn’t be.
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Got milk?
Wait. Vampires don’t exist? So many romance writers — and readers — will be so upset.
Nice six.
Smokin’ eye candy!
Got Milk? Or fangs? Love it! And she should run now.
The snippet is fabulous–but I gotta tell ya, it’s not fangs I’m looking at if that’s Sebastian above. Rawrrrrr.
Excellent pacing even in just this tiny excerpt! Intriguing six.
Lovely show of trepidation! LOVE the picture! 🙂
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon’s Heart 6SS
Lost the ability to read for a second because of the photo. 🙂
so glad I re-gained it because I Loved the six!
Fantastic six, I liked her voice in the making light heart of her situation. Well done!
I think those teeth are real. She should check a little closer just to be sure. Milk, it does a body good. Mmm, milk…
Hot six and great picture!
Whoa! I could eat my breakfast cereal right off those…abs! Lol! The story sounds fabulous- I could just eat it up-lol! Glad to know for certain that YOU are real Dee, in every sense of the word. Hugs!
Perfect blend of fear, doubt and wonder. Nice pic too : )
Ok first…
YUM! That picture is freaking hot!
two..
Hee! vampire teeth are sexy!!!
xx
A.
Oh, Alice… Do you really want to get that close to those teeth?
Of course, if he’s anything like the greatest milk ad ever, then screw it. Some people wanna be bitten 😉
This is just a fantastic six! You really do have a way with words Dee
Milk is definitely good and good for you, I think. Great six!
How can I concentrate on your words when I now want to lick milk like a cat? LOL Great six and a very hot photo, Dee!
love the build up — the eye candy is freaking awesome!! think i will go grab a glass of milk, btw …
I want to be Alice, Bast’s world sound exciting ! 🙂
Of course vampires exist, and don’t let anyone tell you otherwise! 😉
Great six!
Great six! Always interesting to see how “humans” react to the news of vamp existence.
Good six. And the picture . . . Mmmm. Nice Apollo’s belt on the guy.
Had to tear my eyes off that photo long enough to read. Great six!
love the set up to her finding out that vampires exist. good six!
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C.
Girl, something tells me he’s the real deal. And also that I’ll be baking cookies tonight. Darn milk and its siren call to sin! 😉
Great six. We authors are such bad influences. Oh and I think your guy there needs some of my chocolate milk I bought this morning. Yum.
Makes you wonder what kind of proof she’s looking for. Come on, Sebastian, nibble her! You can wash it down with milk after.
I’m suddenly very, very thirsty…for MILK! Nice eye candy.
Oh, I hope he has a fun time convincing her he’s most definitely real. Nice six!
How the hell do you ever expect me to get to your six when you keep putting up such yummy eye candy?!?
Of course, that breathlessness only gets worse after reading your snippet. Fantastic work this week!
Nothing but trouble ever comes from authors and older brothers! Great tension in this snippet and humor, too. Terrific six!
Great six! And no, of course vampires don’t exist…LOL
You realize I only read the snippet once the kidlet came into the room and I had to scroll down to hide the picture, right?
Great six, but man, I am now thirsty.
Well of course they aren’t real. Wait. Right? 😉
Love your six. But now I suddenly have a craving for milk…..
Careful, girl. Vampire’s bite!
He’s a vampire and blood is mother’s milk to him…hmm, milk. I think all your readers will be pouring out some milk tonight…
Great emotion in your six. It is very believable. And whoa! Is milk doing that guys body good 🙂 Have mercy!
Silly woman! Of course they exist! As she is about to find out! Loved the buildup here! 😉
Holy mother! I’ll never look at milk the same way again…oh, and nice snippet!
Oh! WOW! Purrr omg that milk. Those abs. Dee!
He’s real alright. Loving the build up here. Great six! 😀
Well, can’t expect her to beleive right away…but I have a feeling she’ll come around eventually! 😉
I dont even like milk, but he could convince me to like it, im sure! And the six was fab! Poor girl sounds like she is in for a shock!
Your storytelling is awesome. This prose is just so easy to fall into and get engaged with. Love the turns of phrase and the crisp pacing which just drew me right in. And, I do adore those vampires, fangs and all. Can’t wait to read more.
I love her hesitation and disbelief. Fantastic
I really like her train of thought… so sure she’s right, yet at the same time, trying to convince herself she’s right 😉
I don’t know what’s better…your SSS or your pix every week.
Yeesh woman.
How am I supposed to look at milk the same way again?
I can totally see her peering into his mouth like a science project. LOL Great six!