Six Sentence Sunday
#sixsunday is royally pissed off in my medical I/R romance, NO GREATER JOY. Remember that one? Yeah. I picked it up again. ADHD at its finest folks…you never know which story is going to be worked on from day to day. Right now, Joy is arguing with her ex-boyfriend Derek while Porter watches.
“Get out.” She was shaking with rage. “Give me your key and get out.”
“I can give you this one, but you know someone will just slip me a copy sooner or later.”
“And I’ll castrate the person who does.”
Porter snorted with laughter.
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‘Castrate’ … *Gulps* hot pic xx
She seems very, very angry. But that picture is HOT!
Oh, she’s a feisty one! Loved the snippet!!
That’s one angry woman! But he only laughs – interesting. 🙂
Awesome…*chuckles* I can just see it. Great six, Dee
Wow! Someone is super pissed! Love how you write rage into your dialogue, Dee!
Nice—I love a good fight scene! Hoping it lands them in a bed together some day soon, to work out all that aggression.
Keys and locks. So fraught with meaning! LOL!
Every sentence has an undertone of sexual suggestion. Very nice!
Feisty! I love it
He must have done something pretty bad to piss her off that much! Perhaps he’ll get to grovel later.
I’d be pissed if my ex let himself into my place, too. Love the snippet!
Great six Dee! 😀
Oh, yeah, that’s angry! Great six!
oooh tempting 6. love the drama and fiesty aggression.
Ooh, her anger is palpable! Loved! And holy crikey that picture.
damn! what’d he do???
Wow, she’s pretty pissed. Nice!
Well at least he can laugh in the face of danger. lol
Great six. And great pic!
Oh she sounds serious dude! Let her cook off! Oh and love the pic!
I’m friends with most of my exes. I even did a blog for one…*wink* Great six, Dee. I love it when your heroines are pissed off. They have the best dialogue.
Yeah, she’s pissed off all right. I don’t think I’d want to cross her at this point. Great six!
Damn! Castration sounds a little harsh. But considering she’s pissed, I’d just listen.
Nice pic as always girl! 😀
Great dialogue! loved it!
Uh oh, sounds like trouble! LOL Great six!
Love Porter’s snort of laughter! He’d better be careful not to get a punch in the nose, though. 🙂
Who’s slipping him keys? That’s really disturbing.
I can feel and understand her anger. Great six and pic!
I’m with Jessica, I can feel and understand her anger too.
Great tension here, Dee. Her anger is palpable. I’m glad you’re working on this one again. 😉
Love how she is determined to stand her ground and follows up with a consequence no man would want to risk.
I also snorted with laughter 😉 He really knows what to say to get under her skin…
Hehe, love that feisty character. And the pic was muchly appreciated *drools* 😉
Damn he must have done something really screwed up for her to threaten to castrate someone. I’m scared of her. But I like her. 🙂
Awesome six!