Six Sentence Sunday
#sixsunday is making an admission to Alice, a tough task for a vampire warrior.
“What do you mean?”
His throat tightening, Bast considered how much to tell her about this thorn in his side. “I’m…” He struggled to find the right word. One that wouldn’t break him to say. “Flawed.”
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How deliciously vunerable you’ve made him.
Oh, how I love it when they’re flawed. Nice six!
Immediately – i need to know more… i finks you rock 😉 xx
By the looks of him, I don’t think saying that one word will break him. I wish this wasn’t a wip…
Intense! Great job 🙂
Aw. Love how he’s making himself share this with her even though it clearly makes him so uncomfortable. I’m with Heather – want to read this now.
‘Flawed’ that’s one way to put it, but then again, who isn’t without flaws? Nice snippet!
Oh, flawed heroes make the best heroes! Nice, intense Six!
Awww… I love his pause before the admission. Nice 6.
I can feel his uncertainty and reluctance. Sweet six, Dee. 🙂
Hmmm…funny, if that’s a pic of Bast, he doesn’t look flawed to me. 😉
Okay, so strong and powerful – but flawed. Love it. And yum to the unflawed picture
Mmmm… I wonder what the “flaw” is, or rather, what *he* thinks it is. Somehow I don’t think she will find it quite as serious as he seems to feel it is. Great six, and thanks for sharing!
Very nice! Lots of emotion packed into those six sentences.
I love ‘this thorn in his side’; terrific word choice.
I don’t see any flaws! Great sex, l mean six!
Great snippet. Love a tortured hero 🙂
I bet whatever the thorn is can EASILY be overlooked by a discerning heroine, in view of his general hotness. Excellent excerpt!
But flawed is such a temptation, doesn’t he know that? Well done!
Poor Bast! He’s tryin’to be honest! Great 6.
His vulnerability here makes him that much sexier. Great six! 🙂
That picture is SO SEXY. *sigh* Great six, Dee! Happy Sunday!
Flawed! Perfect word. He instantly has my sympathy and interest. How can she resist him now?
Great six as always Dee!
Flawed…a whole lot of meanings under that word. Wonder which ones apply to him?
Great six, Dee!
Flawed? Flawed how? What? I need more!
~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon’s Heart 6SS
Love the choice of words. ‘Flawed’ seems hardly to be the case, but if he says so, I’m dying to see how the rest unravels. 😉
Fab six, Dee!
Deliciously wicked. Flawed indeed!
Tortured men are the best. 😉
Whew! Excellent six! That gave me a little ache in my heart, the one word he could say that wouldn’t break him. *Sigh!* 🙂
Very nice hook!
Loved it!
That one word probably brings her closer to him. Any man who considers himself without flaws is bound to be insufferable, but that vulnerability is irresistible! Intriguing six!