Six Sentence Sunday
#sixsunday is a tortured hero being…well, tortured. PASSION AROUSED is just past the halfway mark and things are getting dire.
Growling, he pushed up. Demanded his body to heed the command to rise. There was a split-second of victory, when he was certain he could move without collapsing again. But as he looked toward the back door, figuring it would only take half a dozen steps to make it inside, his vision narrowed. And pain exploded down his back.
Bast screamed, unable to hold back the cry of being tortured by a body that was no longer under his control.
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If his body looks like the picture just leave him there and I’ll fix it. 🙂
Great description Dee. I can see his face wince in pain as his back pain hits.
Oh no! He does not sound like he is having a good time.
Oh poor man! Anything l can do to help? Massage perhaps?
Whoa! What happened to the guy? Intense 6, Dee.
You totally caught his frustration in those 6. Great job.
Ooh! Intense scene. Great six.
I lost the ability to read for a moment there with that picture – lol. But it all came back to me because of your wonderful six!
Aww, feeling kinda bad for him. Great job!
I totally volunteer my services to soothe him. 😉 Loved!
Poor guy! I want to help him. Very descriptive six!
Intense, Dee! Love your six!
Um, can hottie-man’s bathing suit be any smaller?? LOL!!
What have you done to the poor, hot hero? 😉 I hope he feels *much* better soon!
Oh wow, intense! Great six.
Intense six…hope he’s okay!
Bast and I both winced when “…pain exploded down his back.” Very visual six. Well done.
*wince* Poor guy. This snippet is very intense.
Congrats on reaching the halfway point!
Yikes! Hope he recovers soon.
That does sound dire. Great way to make us feel his pain.
OMG, the poor man! And I agree – if that’s him in the pic, I volunteer to play nurse… 🙂
Intriguing! And visceral. My back totally gave a little sympathy wince for him. Or maybe I just need to work on my posture. In either case, well done!
This gives new meaning to “tortured” hero!
Please send me the man in the picture. Thanks.
Intense six, Dee. Why is he being tortured and how? 🙁 Well done and congrats on reaching half-way. 🙂
Great grabber. Is someone else controlling his body? Need to read more!
You had me wincing there, too. Wonderful, torturous six!
Ouch! Wonderfully descriptive six.
Oh, I feel so bad for him. Want to help.
A great six! Keeping me anxious to read the entire thing. 🙂
Fabulously intense.
Great six!
You make me want to rush to help him!
Yikes. Poor guy.
Oh, Holy, Jesus! That picture! *drools* oh, and fab six x 😉
Why has he lost control? A tortured, intense six! Love the pic 🙂
Oh noes! What a gut wrenching six, poor Bast. You definitely leave me wondering why his body is no longer under his control, and looking at your post tags my imagination is in overdrive. I enjoy reading your sixes (and the pics are nice, too 😉 ). 🙂
Aw, poor guy! His pain is palpable. Well done!
Descriptive six! I want to read more! And oh, my, that picture is delish! 🙂
Oh! Don’t torture him any more, poor man. I could feel his agony. 🙁
o_O What’s going on??????
This is insanely intense! Excellent!
Oh, wow. Very powerful six.
Of course, the visual probably had something to do with my visceral reaction, too. 🙂
Oh, who’s controlling him? Must. Know. Now!
Nice description.
What is going on with his body? Great description and suspense!
It took me a while to find the sentences, what with that mighty distracting picture! 😉
But the sentences are equally intriguing…
Oh noes!!!! I hope he’ll be okay! He will, won’t he???? O_O
Fantastic writing. and oh that pic!
Definitely want to know more. Great six!
Powerful six!
Really felt his frustration!
Wow, what an excerpt! Really feel for him.
aww, poor baby needs me to make him feel better 😉
Dee, this is FANTASTIC!! His frustration, pain, and movements really drew me in.