Six Sentence Sunday
#sixsunday is telling him he’d better keep going. 40K in and Sebastian and Alice have *finally* put an end to their suffering.
Bast clenched his jaw, fighting for control of his body. He tried to distract himself. “I would stop if you asked me, Alice. It would kill me but I would stop.”
She lifted her head and gifted him with a wry smile. “Stop and I’ll be the one to kill you.”
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Cute! The best kind of agony.
OH MY GOODNESS THAT PIC IS EPIC! and I love the six too.
Fan-freakin-tastic last line, Dee! The pic is incredibly yummy too.
Sexy six!
LOL. Don’t stop! Great snippet. I love their banter in the bedroom…or wherever it is they are at the moment. 😉
Lol! I love their chemistry.
Oh, awesome six! I’m sure they’ll be so hot together. Can’t wait! 🙂
That’s a great six, love the set up.
Hah! Great line, Alice!
Her spunk is amazing. Though, I’ve gotta say Bast is giving off a bit of an Edward Cullen vibe, here. Or maybe it’s just a vampire thing. Loved it, either way!
I love when the heroine gets so worked up she threatens her lover with death if he stops. Just gives me the tingles 😀
Oh, yeah, baby. The go-ahead! 😀 Sexy six, Dee. And I love the photo!
Love the banter! 🙂
Well said, Alice! 🙂
It hurts so good! 🙂
So, uh, I guess there’s no stopping them, huh? LOL! Love that passion!
That last line says so much about her! Love it!
lol. Perfect response!!!
a sense of humour in bed (or whereever) is necessary – but I would kill him too if he stops
Ha! Great six, Dee (as always).
Love these six! Can’t wait to read the whole story. 🙂
Wonderful dialogue! Looks like a great payoff after 40,000 words!
Oh yes! Who could resist that?!
Great dialogue.
Atta girl! Love it!
I like her!
OH. SO. HOT!
Whew! These six definitely left me wanting more. I really liked the tension of him fighting for control and then her remark at the end lets the reader take a breath – one of anticipation for what’s next. Nice! 🙂
Love the tension and her response!
Atta girl, Alice! It’s about damn time 😉
Ahahaha Damn, I’d kill him too. Don’t you dare stop, Bast! 😀
I like her spunk. Great six!
Loved her come-back. Great 6, Dee.
LOL and YUM! Great six and fab pic! You never disappoint 🙂
He he, love it!
Love the dialogue Dee!